I'll hold ur breath in mine,
as u sunshine down upon me.
Breaths deep and shallow,
eyes closed shut; in a wink it'll all be gone;
you by my side close to my heart.
The candle will flicker and then shut us out of its light.
Lights blur, dizzy darkness,
Lights blur,warm darkness.
The strands in your eyes is all I can see.
A still moment, my hands around you, you snug between the sheets.
And then,silence.
6 comments:
Really nice poem.. exceptionally interesting ideas and images, for a starter, I must say.. All the best.. Keep writing such lovely stuff.. :)
she will love it , the one whom u ll dedicate it to finally
loved it....simple and touching....its like naice....:)
Lovely post!!
I loved those two lines:
Lights blur, dizzy darkness
Lights blur, warm darkness
Thank you guys... :) this feels so great, having people read n tell me how i write n that they actually like it. :)
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